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Three Days in Termina - Five by Liefesa Three Days in Termina - Five by Liefesa
This is part five of the narrative poem "Three Days in Termina".
(This is the follow-up to an Ocarina of Time narrative poem- part one is here:[link])

The poem is split into 'cycles': each cycle covers three days in the land of Termina.

This is the Fifth Cycle: it covers Ikana Graveyard, Ikana Canyon, the well beneath Ikana, Ancient Castle of Ikana, Stone Tower, and Stone Tower Temple. Plus a small change in the final refrain, as the moon is finally stopped.

Submitted as a graphic for layout reasons ^^

Hope you like it! :la:

Characters, names and plot (c) Nintendo
Poem and all lyrics (c) me ^^
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Other Cycles

First Cycle
Second Cycle
Third Cycle
Fourth Cycle
Cycle Suspended (Part 6)
Beyond the Cycle (part 7)
Masquerade (bonus part)  
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Kienamaru Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
With a bolt,
to ruby's core
temple moves
'gainst natures law.

perhaps change moves to jolts? Ill think of another word for either law or core.
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Liefesa Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011
Good one, yeah. Maybe better to reorganise those few lines to have bolt and jolt as the main rhymes... ^^
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Vitality-Eminent Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011
Lovelylovelylovely as always. :D I'm looking forward to the moon shenanigans~
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Liefesa Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011
^^ Thanks! :hug:
Moon next. Then the ending. ...then a bonus section for all the masks ^^
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Know-Kname Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011
awesome cant wait for more :D
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Liefesa Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011
^^ Thanks!
Three parts left to come!
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PrissyKissy Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so great.....the Ikana area was always so creepy :fear: And I had forgotten all that was involved in going through it, but you just reminded me :)
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Liefesa Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011
:D I loved replaying it!
There's so much to do, and I still couldn't make room to mention getting info from the Garos using the Garo mask then battling them...
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HeadmistressMercedes Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome as always! Love your description of Ikana Castle ^.^ Faved!
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Liefesa Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011
^^ Glad you liked it! And thanks for the :+fav: and Watch! :hug:
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