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Three Days in Termina - Three by Liefesa Three Days in Termina - Three by Liefesa
This is part three of the narrative poem "Three Days in Termina".
(This is the follow-up to an Ocarina of Time narrative poem- part one is here:[link])

The poem is split into 'cycles': each cycle covers three days in the land of Termina.

This is the Third Cycle: it covers the Mountain Village, Goron Village, Snowhead, Snowhead Temple, and a quick visit to Romani Ranch. (I hope the slightly humorous line about the task at the ranch doesn't feel misplaced...)

Submitted as a graphic for layout reasons ^^

Hope you like it! :la:

Characters, names and plot (c) Nintendo
Poem and all lyrics (c) me ^^
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Other Cycles

First Cycle
Second Cycle
Fourth Cycle
Fifth Cycle
Cycle Suspended (part 6)
Beyond the Cycle (part 7)
Masquerade (bonus part)  
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:iconkaizokushojo:
KaizokuShojo Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2011   Traditional Artist
Excellent. :thumbsup:
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Liefesa Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011
^.^ Thanks again! :D
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Kienamaru Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
might you change icicle to icy? To help the flow
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:iconliefesa:
Liefesa Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011
Hmmm... yeah. As I wrote, I think I was pronouncing 'icicle' in a quite phonologically reduced way, so the flow was ok-ish; and I wanted to avoid repeating 'icy'.
Good suggestion though! :highfive:
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Ex-Kalibur Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Another (especially) amazing poem! I give this one... 5/5 !
:star::star::star::star::star:
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Liefesa Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011
:dance: Thank you! Glad you like it! I hope the next cycles can live up to the five-star level! :giggle:
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Ex-Kalibur Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011  Student Digital Artist
By the way, what style of poem (I mean like pacing etc.) is this? It really meshes well with Zelda for some reason.

Another question. Are you doing this for other Zelda games?
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Liefesa Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011
Err... I don't know anything about poetry, academically speaking. So I have no idea what style this is in! :disbelief: :O_o:

As for other Zelda games... maybe... A few people have asked so I think I'll do a poll later for people to choose which one comes next! :D
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MajorasMasks Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011  Professional Artisan Crafter
I love everything, the part about the aliens too! :lol:
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Liefesa Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011
^^ Thanks! I wanted to include it, but it's quite an unusual section so I was unsure...
:D
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:iconvitality-eminent:
Vitality-Eminent Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
All three of these are great! You're really capturing the mood of playing this game. Can't wait to the read the next one.
And the alien/ranch reference is fine. :3 I chuckled on the inside, heehee.
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:iconliefesa:
Liefesa Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
:D Thanks! ^^
Glad the ranch reference was ok!
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Know-Kname Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
these poems are amazing, i love them
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Liefesa Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
:bow: Thank you very much!
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PrissyKissy Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the way you end each cycle with that last stanza :)

This is one of my favorite parts of the game; I loved the Snowhead temple and ghost-busting on the ranch :D I like that you write what happened in the game but also a bit of insight into what Link was likely thinking and feeling...like relief that Epona was there on the ranch :)
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Liefesa Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
^^ Thanks! Glad you like the littler details too!
:hug:
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shoujo-sugar Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This one is so pretty toooo~♥
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Liefesa Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
^^ Thank you! :D
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Br0kenD0ll0fr0ses Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Professional Artist
Nice one!
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:iconliefesa:
Liefesa Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
:D Thanks!
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KnightOfModernDay Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm always happy to find one of these in my inbox.
Another great cycle, I am really loving these. :D
Great job!
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Liefesa Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
Thanks! :highfive:
Glad you like them so far!
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KnightOfModernDay Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My pleasure!
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:iconliefesa:
Liefesa Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
:D
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Adder-Adz Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay :D
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:iconliefesa:
Liefesa Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
:giggle:
Thanks for the :+fav:!
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Adder-Adz Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem, totally deserved. I love reading these :D You should totally do some of these for other Zelda games as well as OoT and MM haha :P
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Liefesa Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
:D :hug:
I'm thinking about it! Not sure which to do next... WW would be logical, though there's also the handheld ones...
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Adder-Adz Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
Yeah! WW would be cool, I think the handheld ones would be awesome too, like Minish Cap or the Oracle series :D They're my faves :P
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Liefesa Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
I started on a Minish one ^^ Only a few lines in, but I might continue it :D
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Adder-Adz Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay! :dance: This is awesome news :D
As soon as I see it in my messages ...:typerhappy: :+fav: :)
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Liefesa Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011
:giggle:
Thanks!
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